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6161: Cloak_of_Gray_Tomorrow Katia:_Infiltrate character:Katia_Managan monochrome very_casually_underdressed
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CyVoltage: This is the first time I’ve been able to post something I’ve drawn into the Prequel Fanart page. Critique is great if you’ve got it, don’t ask me to draw porn. K, thanks, bye
KuroNeko: Nice, I really like her pose.
As for critique, I guess her left hand is a bit too small and the lines could be cleaner but that's all I can find, this is good.
Kazerad: =D oh man, you drew a scene that was only implied through sound. That is really cool.
Zargothrax: Very well drawn, welcome to the artists club!
The pose is dynamic, and the piece altogether tells a story (the infiltration), not just showing one of a character from the comic as is, which is not something anyone expects, it is a plus. I like how you applied perspective on the feet. Realistically, at this distance it shouldn't be this prominent, but in my opinion, artists may bend reality a little to make a drawing more dramatic. As for advice (take it or leave it): If you're drawing on paper, when drawing the pupils, or irises (for Katia they seem to be one and the same), always draw them as just a faint dot at first. This already shows where the character is looking, so if mistaken, can be fixed quickly, as erasing a dot is easy. Then, it is just a matter of drawing a circle around the dot, then fill. Drawing an eye, then realizing that they don't really look in the same direction is really painful to fix as an afterthought. By the way, you didn't remove the exif data from the image before uploading it! Creeps online can read personal data from this metadata from the image. Sometimes it even contains the coordinates where the picture was taken. Also, there are instances where the exif data also contains preferences about how the image should be oriented, in which case an uploaded picture can appear sideways when uploaded. https://www.verexif.com/en/
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CyVoltage: @Zargothrax: Oh damn, I see you’re one of the more helpful people alive. Thanks for the tips and especially the information on exif data, I had no idea that kind of information was available through the photo alone. Thanks for the help!
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CyVoltage: @KuroNeko: Yeah, I suck at making good lines, so I usually go for a sketchy style, although I should be trying a clean style sooner rather then later
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Arcikeligo: Not /quite/ sure what all's happening, but I love it! Keep it up!
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6170: character:your_weird_OC dreams tears
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DarthVader: She’s dead!? Hallelujah!
Dominik: @DarthVader: Actually, it's more like just one of her nightmares. Drawing her dead is too much for me
@Zargothrax: At first i wanted her neck to be less straight but i was afraid that it might look worse. Sometimes the best solution is the easiest one 
animegaylover: it looks great betr ten mt drawings at school :0
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873: Solid_Snake blood character:Katia_Managan comic crossover knock_off metal_gear mudcrabs text
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Man_Of_Mer: Grrr! Crab battle!
HuffingtontheOnly: mud crabs. the worst. i run them through every time i see them.
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Petrified_Yo-yo: I dont get it-Patrick
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6154: Katia's_wizard_robe artist:KuroNeko bad_end character:Katia_Managan food monochrome sweet_roll text
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DarthVader: Just get over it, it’s just a sweet roll
PermanentFace: Is the sweetroll very large or is Katia somewhat far away?
KuroNeko: @PermanentFace: It's a bit of both I'd say. It's a Skyrim sweetroll, they are pretty big but it's true I overdid it a bit here, and I put Katia a little too far behind so it looks like she is far away.
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1277: Katia's_wizard_robe artist:tooosh character:Katia_Managan magic_fire
6167: Blade Marksman artist:KuroNeko bow character:Katia_Managan character:Quill-Weave character:Rajirra hist_glands magic_fire monochrome painted_underwear questionable spear very_casually_underdressed
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Rick2tails: theres some nice anatomy here ;)
Zargothrax: How do you even draw these, Kuro? I mean, you said you were practising anatomy, yet I see now scribbles of previous attempts erased, guidelines, representations of body parts by simple 3D forms, etc., just perfectly drawn cats and lizard. If you just drew these "as is", you're pretty damn OP. Or did you practice like most of us do, then illuminated the paper from behind, placed an other sheet on it and inked that way?
KuroNeko: @Sashimi: @Rick2tails: Thank you
@Zargothrax: Oh no, I'm not good enough to draw something in one try, I usually do a sketch with a pencil and once I'm satisfied with the result, I ink it and erase the pencil lines. If you can't see them it's because I draw very light lines that get erased easily and without leaving a trace on the paper. For instance it took me three attepts to get Katia's left arm right and to not makes her shoulder look dislocated. |
6169: acrobatics action_pose adorable artist:lapma character:Katia_Managan modern_clothing pineapple sunglasses tail_sleeve
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Rick2tails: thats one big pineapple!
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I'm likin these Lapma!
6165: adorable artist:lapma character:Katia_Managan crossover
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KuroNeko: I don't get the reference but this is cute. I like how you drew her hands, they look like cat paws.
AMKitsune: Oooh, I get it now!
I was trying to figure out what the black thing she's holding is, when it dawned on me. A hat! Knowing that, how many others cats hold their hats like that while making big eyes?
Rick2tails: is this supposed to be a puss in boots from Shrek reference?
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6163: Blade Kvatch_arena_armor armor_design artist:lapma character:Katia_Managan smiling
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Rick2tails: cute though the extreme foreshadowing on the one foot makes it look like a mlp hoof or something
Kazerad: @Rick2tails: I think you mean foreshortening! Foreshadowing is when you're pretty sure the foot is going to kick you.
Rick2tails: @kazerad hey ...er.. I could mean both
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6164: artist:Serinexxa character:Katia_Managan hoodie_katia robes
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Also it's nice to see how many new artists joined the boruu lately!
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