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Deecio: I'd love to get some criticism from anybody if they've got some, I'm always looking to improve! (also sorry about the image size)

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AMKitsune: What's wrong with the image size? It's a good high resolution without being 'stupid high' resolution. The best of both worlds.

As far as critique goes, the only things that I can see that could use a little work are the shapes of her head and neck. As they are, her neck's a bit on the wide side and her head seems oddly shaped and positioned relative to her neck (her head strangely melds into her torso). Kazerad has a good example of a profile shot of Katia's head on this 'drawing guide'

http://www.prequeladventure.com/fanartbooru/post/view/999

Besides that though, everything else's brilliant. The pose and clothing are spot on, the lighting's soft but believable and the 'blinding effect' matches the comic while having it's own eerie 'realism' about it.

I hope that was of some help.

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CaptainLackwit: I do love how you've depicted the blinding effect.

That whole stealing-the-iris thing was a stroke of artistic genius.

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Deecio: Thanks a ton for the critique and compliments, I really appreciate it! Also thanks for the link to the drawing reference, I never knew about it :D

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KingClaws: Aside from the absent jawline/chin, and ears which reach down her neck, this is a solid drawing. 7/10

I love the blindness effect. I hope Kazerad uses something like it.

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8Aerondight8: This is why you should wait for the paint to dry before going back to fill in any details, also long floppy sleeves can really make a mess on you canvas.

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CaptainLackwit: @KingClaws: He does tho.