damrok4321: Its Good. You could help yourself by pressing the pencil lighter while you’re making sketch. It wouldn’t leave remaining lines after erasing. Also you could use some tissue under your hand with pencil to prevent it from bluring.
Geravind: Facial metric noncompliance. The eyes positioning implies, that her face's width mismatches her muzzle's length. Also, the face's angle mismatches the head's angle.
Learn cheekbone line carefully.
The muzzle's height mismatches a bit her brain-space.
The "shaping" is okay, but overall proportions here and there go fucking off (torso height and shoulders' width, for example).
Don't do those EDGY shoulders, they look freaking.
The left handpaw is too small, the right handpaw is monstrous.
Sashimi: In this one, something about the head just looks a bit more canine than feline to me, and the thumb on her right hand seems too long. But keep at it! Love to see new art.
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Learn cheekbone line carefully.
The muzzle's height mismatches a bit her brain-space.
The "shaping" is okay, but overall proportions here and there go fucking off (torso height and shoulders' width, for example).
Don't do those EDGY shoulders, they look freaking.
The left handpaw is too small, the right handpaw is monstrous.
...very innocent expression for lady Rajirra. :P
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