bluedraggy: Can't stop now. I'm almost halfway done. And be thankful that during the bit where a guard stops and pisses on a nearby wall I didn't put a sound effect in for that. I thought about it!

I think this is the longest, but with AMK's suggestions it still fits easily within 3.5M.

AMKitsune: Quite the suspenseful chapter! Very good for the most part, it's just a shame that the few occasions where you audibly hesitated with words kind of broke the sense of immersion for a brief moment. It's a minor thing, but it's a shame for something so engaging to be brought down by something so easily fixable. Also, 3.1MB woo! You'll probably be able to break the 20 minute mark at this rate.

bluedraggy: I know the places you're referring to. I was thinking about correcting them but ended up not bothering. But now I know they are offputting and I'll tighten them up going forward. Which is surprisingly easy with Audacity - just shift them a bit closer, I don't even have to re-record. Keep the comments coming, esp. like this that can help me improve. I can't fix my accent, but I can fix this.