damrok4321: Nice job, I have only a feeling that her breasts might be a bit less wide placed but besides it, I can clearly see the improvement. Practice anatomy.
KuroNeko: Like damrok4321 said her breats are too far apart as well as to high, I think it could be because you made her shoulders too wide. I presume you drew her with the outfit on instead of drawing her naked and then adding the clothes? This can cause some problems with the anatomy.
But other than that chest problem you definitely improved from your previous attempt, the proportions and the anatomy are better, the pose is a bit less static and you did the effort to color it.
This may not be perfect but you improved a lot and that's what matters, great job, keep it up
Zargothrax: I see a lot of improvement too on your work, Dominik.
As for further improvement, I sense what Kuro said as well about the drawing process. Personally I always start with the gesture, then the sketch of the naked body, then the sketch of the clothing (on an another layer) and finally an ink layer, which will be the only visible one. Plus the color if I include it.
Dominik: @KuroNeko[/url:[url=site://post/view/6699#c40978]@Zargothrax: Thanks guys! Its nice to hear some warm words. You are right Kur, i started from the clothes cus i was feeling weird with idea of drawning her naked first and then putting clothes. But you are propably right, should have done that first.
I got some problems with layers. Sometimes, when i want to erase or add something, i forget about the layers and they mix together because of it. I guess i will have to at least try to remember about them. I will try train anatomy with my drawnings, maybe it will help. Thanks again for tips!
KuroNeko: @Dominik: If you don't feel confortable with drawing characters naked you don't need to draw it very detailled, the basic shapes will be more than enough.
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But other than that chest problem you definitely improved from your previous attempt, the proportions and the anatomy are better, the pose is a bit less static and you did the effort to color it.
This may not be perfect but you improved a lot and that's what matters, great job, keep it up
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As for further improvement, I sense what Kuro said as well about the drawing process. Personally I always start with the gesture, then the sketch of the naked body, then the sketch of the clothing (on an another layer) and finally an ink layer, which will be the only visible one. Plus the color if I include it.
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I got some problems with layers. Sometimes, when i want to erase or add something, i forget about the layers and they mix together because of it. I guess i will have to at least try to remember about them. I will try train anatomy with my drawnings, maybe it will help. Thanks again for tips!
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