Whistle: okay this again not complete version see new here
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/34524397/

Dominik: It feels a little bit surrealistic to me. Good art

KuroNeko: The pose looks good and is not that easy to pull off so good work on that. Yhe man problem I see here is that the proportion of her torso are wrong, also it might just be me but I think her legs are a bit dislocated (can anyone with a better understanding of anatomy than me confirm?)
I can make some corrections to help you better visualise what I mean if you want.

Tabby_Catface: @KuroNeko: Tabby confirmed. I was just too lazy to say something like that.

Rick2tails: yeah that whole hip area is completely messed up the legs arent atached correctly unless you were going for some cubist thing or something