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Yeltsa_Kcir: First serious attempt at digital art, i'll be grateful for your evaluations (oh yeah and, i covered the other characters face, to leave it to the viewers imagination.. but there are really only two other khajiit.. so.. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯)
AMKitsune: Oooh, it took me a while to understand what's going on here, but I get it now. (I just couldn't parse the camera and camera flash in my mind for a while)
The composition and anatomy are spot on. The only thing that really hold it back in my opinion would be the lack of contrast. I understand that this is meant to be a faded of sepia photograph, but to give a quick example, the flash of the camera should probably be as bright as the 'camera' can handle (given that it would be overexposed), so no other 'non-lightsource' parts of the image should be as bright.
Another example would be the photographer's left (our right) arm, where it's mostly the same shade as their shirt, so can visually blend in a bit. Did you by any chance make this in full colour to begin with then desaturate it? Because if that's the case, even if areas are visually distinct with colour, desaturating them can sometimes remove that visual contrast.
Once again though, fantastic posing and anatomy. I look forward to seeing what you make next.
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The composition and anatomy are spot on. The only thing that really hold it back in my opinion would be the lack of contrast. I understand that this is meant to be a faded of sepia photograph, but to give a quick example, the flash of the camera should probably be as bright as the 'camera' can handle (given that it would be overexposed), so no other 'non-lightsource' parts of the image should be as bright.
Another example would be the photographer's left (our right) arm, where it's mostly the same shade as their shirt, so can visually blend in a bit. Did you by any chance make this in full colour to begin with then desaturate it? Because if that's the case, even if areas are visually distinct with colour, desaturating them can sometimes remove that visual contrast.
Once again though, fantastic posing and anatomy. I look forward to seeing what you make next.
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