Radian: No colors, no background. Redraw rating: 2/10

Geravind: Her torso is too small accordingly to her paws.

Good composition though.

Kazerad: >: aw why is everyone suddenly mean to this drawing, I like it.

Geravind: @Kazerad: This one isn't mean -- most noticeable mistakes (if any) must be pointed out (hopefully, it helps all local artists someway). And compliments should be applied as well.
Generally this drawing is pretty cool.

AMKitsune: Yeh, her torso is a bit on the thin side, but besides that, this is a pretty fantastic picture. It's cartoony but still has good anatomy, pose and expression.