Brevity is the soul of wit. In essence, make anything the comes from your whelpling fingers be succinct, and that you don't overstay your welcome. Writing for too long can...
Armored-Struggle-Wagon: although I'm not one for criticism, I really can only support, and encourage, keep drawing, I know one day that you will be an expert! I very much like your artstyle, it's very cute, and unique, in its own way.
Armored-Struggle-Wagon: @unknown_victor: It's more of the lines I can't mentally picture anything wrong with it! Every art is beautiful in its own way, regardless of skill, and stuff. ;3 (also I don't like criticizing things )
Cereal: I feel like the handle at some point gets a little floppy.
Like gravity takes effect and it kinda melts downwards.
The waist (below the breasts and above the hips) kinda seems a bit too long, too.
Riddle78: Abdomen seem a little long to me,and the haft on that pole axe is... Well,far,far too long for service as anything other than a spear. Also,did she have an accident with Destruction magic? Because she seems to have lost her thumbs.
That said,excellent effort. Keep kicking that cat.
AMKitsune: @unknown_victor: Aside from the slightly iffy body proportions (which have already been mentioned above), there's not much that I can see wrong with this scene. There's not much motion behind her pose so I imagine her standing in place lifting the axe's handle to try to gauge the (substantial) weight of the thing. That axe has to be meant for some kind of monster or Daedra, right? Surely neither Man nor Mer would be able to wield that thing in battle (and that includes muscle-bound Orcish highwaymen ).
On the note of 'weight' however, one thing that I'll suggest is that given how heavy the business end of that axe looks, unless katia was abnormally strong in this scene, the axe wouldn't be resting on the edge of it's blade as it currently is but would have rolled onto its flattest section (a bit like when a similar scene is shown in Grim Fandango
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To give you a rough idea of how that might look in your scene, I made a quick edit showing the axe head at more of an angle (I'm afraid you'll have to forgive the shoddy edit job. This was never meant to be a pretty edit )
In this case, the angle of the axe head isn't in perfect relation to the angle of the held portion of the pole (because I'm lazy), but this is just to give you an idea of how it might look with an added sense of weight.
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Very narrow hip bone -- she's a girl after all.
Khajiit likes this combat dress! =*_*=
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Like gravity takes effect and it kinda melts downwards.
The waist (below the breasts and above the hips) kinda seems a bit too long, too.
That said,excellent effort. Keep kicking that cat.
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Don't worry, improvements will be made.
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On the note of 'weight' however, one thing that I'll suggest is that given how heavy the business end of that axe looks, unless katia was abnormally strong in this scene, the axe wouldn't be resting on the edge of it's blade as it currently is but would have rolled onto its flattest section (a bit like when a similar scene is shown in Grim Fandango
To give you a rough idea of how that might look in your scene, I made a quick edit showing the axe head at more of an angle (I'm afraid you'll have to forgive the shoddy edit job. This was never meant to be a pretty edit
In this case, the angle of the axe head isn't in perfect relation to the angle of the held portion of the pole (because I'm lazy), but this is just to give you an idea of how it might look with an added sense of weight.
I hope this was of some help.
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Like I said, improvements will be made.