Jadezzar: This one are made by using photoshop. I'm working on this pic, with lots of alteration, when disaster struck. Also originally posted in DeviantArt.

Jadezzar: Critiques and advices would be nice, if someone wants to

DOOMGUY11: The bodies are good I wouldn't change a thing, the heads could use some nice,respectful,caring attention yes?But I am in no position to critique just wait for the real deals

DOOMGUY11: I like their armor, that's another thing it's good. The heads look better now that I analyzed it more (sorry)

Toryu-Mau: @Jadezzar: ... Here's your dose of art vaccine from me~ ( Wields a syringe menacingly ) >);^D
The fingers have been traced thinner then they should be, and the joint locations on the arm is off, due to straying too far from the original sketch. >):^/
And keep in mind that tails have skeletal structure inside that cannot bend at a sharp angle... Poor Jadezzar possibly got bone fracture from zigzagging his tail in this manner. >):^c Try evening out the angles by altering Katia's tail to match the curls, eh?
That's about it from me, M8. Hope it helps. c^:(<
I'm a traditionalist, so digital art is outside of my sphere of influence... Perhaps bluedraggy could point the way to digital coloring? But not about line art, BD specializes in coloring specifically.
Maybe Radian or Roninsmall could give some pointers on line art, but they are super busy so I wouldn't bug 'em, M8.

Jadezzar: @Toryu-Mau: Thanks. As far as I can remember, I did many alterations already. Problem is, now my laptop broke, so I can't access it. If it still there after being repaired, I'll finish it. If not, then I'll work again using this one.

Toryu-Mau: @Jadezzar: ... Don't be afraid to "Break a few eggs" M8.
A lot of times it is more productive to discontinue a piece that is derailing away from the original vision and start a brand new one. >):^]