TotallyNotMe: One of my friends did this, so be nice.

somethingsomething: Tell your friend it is cute!

KuroNeko: It's nice, there is some errors with the anatomy but it looks good, I like the fluff on the top of her ears.
If you want I can correct some of the mistakes so your friend can see how to improve.

TotallyNotMe: @KuroNeko: Well, maybe he will get the hang of it, he hasn't been drawing too much, but if you want to help with some aspect of the drawing, You can.

KuroNeko: So the three main problems I see here are her torso which is too large and long, her right arm which looks dislocated, and her hips which are too thin.

Here I made some corrections,


I shortened her torso and made it thiner while making her hips and legs larger. Also from that angle only a part of her right arm is visible due to perspective.
I hope this help.