Whistle: while she is lying on the beach, I try to remember the last time I was on the beach, I would like to be there with her, but what is painted exists on canvas, and in my village there are only mountain manes, cold spruces and dead snow

Whistle: hell, I got the sheet a little dirty when I was drawing, and yes there are errors in the proportions, I will try to fix this problem during the next work.

KuroNeko: You're already aware of the errors you made so I'm not going to comment on that. I just want to say that you tried to draw a pose that is not that easy (on your previous drawing too) and that's good, there's no getting better if you only draw what's easy to you. Keep working like that and I'm sure you'll get better