Brevity is the soul of wit. In essence, make anything the comes from your whelpling fingers be succinct, and that you don't overstay your welcome. Writing for too long can...
Radiocaster: I actually re-created the entire guild interior in Brickadia to get reference photos. You may have never thought much about it, but the Kvatch mage's guild doesn't have any actual beds. Where does Sigrid sleep? The cave dungeon?? I also wondered where she made her food without any kitchen equipment, but then again, everything she made was probably made with a mortar and pestle, which was probably supposed to be a joke about how you can combine most food items into a "potion" in the game.
I think something important, but easy to forget, about working with a visual medium is knowing when the characters need to shut up. The writing style I find most annoying in comics or shows is when characters are constantly talking, re-iterating information the audience should already know, and leaving no visual spectacle without a maddening rant about what is being shown. I'd like to hope that you guys know Katia well enough to be comfortable outside of her headspace for a little while, and nothing was really coming together. I think it helps the moment speak for itself.
Radiocaster: @NewFace: Yeah, it's been pretty useful for my purposes anyway. I have access to the alpha version, and even with the limited number of bricks and tools, it's pretty versatile and easy to use.
Radiocaster: @bluedraggy: If I recall correctly, my intention was "PREQUEL characters originally by Kaz & co." with the "characters" cut for page space. You are right though, the "originally" is not necessary either.
Radiocaster: Todd Howard can have it when he pries it from my cold dead hands, and even then good luck, because I will have already locked my cold dead hands away at a secure location, and there is no NPC who could possibly mark it on his map!
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I think something important, but easy to forget, about working with a visual medium is knowing when the characters need to shut up. The writing style I find most annoying in comics or shows is when characters are constantly talking, re-iterating information the audience should already know, and leaving no visual spectacle without a maddening rant about what is being shown. I'd like to hope that you guys know Katia well enough to be comfortable outside of her headspace for a little while, and nothing was really coming together. I think it helps the moment speak for itself.
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