Geravind: Not bad. Almost realistic. Noticed some typos again.
Unfortunately, crossbowmen were not mentioned in the skirmish.
As usually, incompetence of the commander doomed all the platoon.
D_C_N: Thanks, at least it's getting better. Hopefully the next part will be devoid of typos and... missing groups of soldiers. And likely not too much incompetence... except maybe for a bit of my own.
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Sorry it took so long, and, yeah, lemme know what ya think.
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Unfortunately, crossbowmen were not mentioned in the skirmish.
As usually, incompetence of the commander doomed all the platoon.
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