Geravind: Much better now!
The right ankle shouldn't be so freaking thin -- try to compare your own to other parts of the same leg.
The skull size, the hands and the shoulders width fit one scale, everything other (even her head's details) -- the other scale. You merged them. Small hands make her wrists to look weirdly long.
That sword is very fantastically impractical for her, but who cares...
Her hip bone is still not noticeable enough, someone will say again about "too long waist".
Makkon: I rather like the sword.
Mind the size of your hands. Otherwise you have good proportions. Things to focus on in the coming months and years are anatomy studies and gestures. I like to use QuickPoses to practice. Nudity, of course.
http://www.quickposes.com/
At this stage it's generally hard for me to give you specific feedback, but if you keep drawing every day and strive to find what you are weak and, and work on those weaknesses, you'll improve very fast.
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The right ankle shouldn't be so freaking thin -- try to compare your own to other parts of the same leg.
The skull size, the hands and the shoulders width fit one scale, everything other (even her head's details) -- the other scale. You merged them. Small hands make her wrists to look weirdly long.
That sword is very fantastically impractical for her, but who cares...
Her hip bone is still not noticeable enough, someone will say again about "too long waist".
Your skill grows up, congratulations. =*_*=
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Mind the size of your hands. Otherwise you have good proportions. Things to focus on in the coming months and years are anatomy studies and gestures. I like to use QuickPoses to practice. Nudity, of course.
http://www.quickposes.com/
At this stage it's generally hard for me to give you specific feedback, but if you keep drawing every day and strive to find what you are weak and, and work on those weaknesses, you'll improve very fast.