KuroNeko: This is very cute and happy little story. I like that it imply that what Katia did in those cult was out of her free will and not her being drunk and taken advantage of.
Also despite the fact we only see Katia's dialogue, it's easy to understand what her interlocutor must be saying. It's a nice writting style that I don't see very often and that is not easy to pull off.
KuroNeko: The arms look nice and follow the perspective quite nicely, her head has the righ width but look squished vertically, my guess is that you ran out of space and reached the edge of the sheet, right? The biggest issue here is her middle section that is way too long and should be at least twice as short. Overall it's quite nice and I can see some improvements Keep it up
@bluedraggy: Coming up next: prequel ultimate, everyone is here. (though seriously, I'll try this againg in the future so I'll definitly include more people next time)
KuroNeko: @XenoYparxi: Yeah that what I figured out for the skull (though I didn't notice the eyes) but I guess I couldn't completly get rid of the way I draw Katia, it's really hard to change your style especially for one as unique as yours. I'll take more time to practice next time and I'll do better.
KuroNeko: @bluedraggy: Eh, sometimes things are better left to the imagination, that way, you can make it as lewd as you want And it's nice to see she got her happy ending, even if it's only in her dreams.
KuroNeko: Well now I regret not waiting a bit before posting my collection of Katia, I could have added the way you draw her instead of how you write about her (I looked for an image of Katia you had drawn but couldn't find anything on the booru).
Anyway this is very nice, I alway like it when people draw Quill fantasizing about Katia. And that transparent red hood is just adorable.
KuroNeko: @damrok4321: Eh, very glad you like it. And I agree, the community here is so friendly and great, it's such a rare thing on the internet. You're all awesome people
KuroNeko: A little thing I wanted to try for a while. I apologize to all the people whom I butchered the art and to those I couldn't include because of lack of space.
Also, semiafro007, since you change your artstyle a lot (it's really great by the way) I opted for the very cartoonish style you used in the last page of your comic, there's a special charm to it.
KuroNeko: She really has gone far in those few days hasn't she?
It's really nice, I like how you did the duality between the two sides, the left one is hunched and doesn't have reflection in her eyes while the right one stands upright and have a bright face.
It looks very good, great work.
KuroNeko: Haha, I love it. I know you prefer drawing Katia but I hope we'll see more of you Quill-Weave art, those last two are great (as are the rest of your stuff of course)
[sub]I think you forgot her eyelashes though[/sub]
KuroNeko: Guys, it's not explicit at all, look at the shading on his legs and Rajirra's face. He his actually holding a luminous cat toy in front of him which is why she's so happy :P
KuroNeko: It's pretty cute, I like how you did the stars in the background.
The sword looks really cool too. what's written on it by the way? (I could translate some words but I can't recognise some letters)
KuroNeko: That's good for a first attempt, you even drawn all the decorations on the chest plate.
Also I had seen the iron armor but I didn't know they had made the other too. That ebony armor looks awesome.
KuroNeko: @Whistle: That's what I thought when I saw you draw the head too small compared to the body.
This is not a bad way to draw, I even heard some professionals saying it's actually better to start with the body and finish with the head. But maybe you could also try starting with the head sometime, maybe it'll help you making the propotions match.
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Also despite the fact we only see Katia's dialogue, it's easy to understand what her interlocutor must be saying. It's a nice writting style that I don't see very often and that is not easy to pull off.
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This is very cute
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@bluedraggy: YES! we need some Cairn corps(TM) ghost hoodies.
@Caps: Yes, with the help of Vaermina, she stole it from the Katia in her dreams.
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(Her brest are deying groavity a bit though)
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Also I might draw Gharug in maid outfit latter too.
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@bluedraggy: Coming up next: prequel ultimate, everyone is here. (though seriously, I'll try this againg in the future so I'll definitly include more people next time)
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that way, you can make it as lewd as you wantAnd it's nice to see she got her happy ending, even if it's only in her dreams.
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Anyway this is very nice, I alway like it when people draw Quill fantasizing about Katia. And that transparent red hood is just adorable.
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@damrok4321: Thanks, and it's not her who have a problem but me who seems to have a weird obssession with lizards and dresses.
@Caps: Thank you
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I like the paterns on the border of the fabric.
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Also, semiafro007, since you change your artstyle a lot (it's really great by the way) I opted for the very cartoonish style you used in the last page of your comic, there's a special charm to it.
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It's really nice, I like how you did the duality between the two sides, the left one is hunched and doesn't have reflection in her eyes while the right one stands upright and have a bright face.
It looks very good, great work.
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[sub]I think you forgot her eyelashes though[/sub]
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Really nice as always.
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The sword looks really cool too. what's written on it by the way? (I could translate some words but I can't recognise some letters)
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Also I had seen the iron armor but I didn't know they had made the other too. That ebony armor looks awesome.
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This is not a bad way to draw, I even heard some professionals saying it's actually better to start with the body and finish with the head. But maybe you could also try starting with the head sometime, maybe it'll help you making the propotions match.