Odraode: That mouth... =-O Don't feel like you must draw every day, or it may become a burden, more than a passion. Draw ehen you feel like it, and take your time. Don't worry about anything else.
Odraode: The problem, I think, is that you have drawn the face frontally, and the body on profile, turned unnaturally. Sorry for my bad English, I hope you understand what I'm trying to express here.
In short, try drawing the body angled at 3/4. Cool blood effects tho.
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In short, try drawing the body angled at 3/4. Cool blood effects tho.