Brevity is the soul of wit. In essence, make anything the comes from your whelpling fingers be succinct, and that you don't overstay your welcome. Writing for too long can...
Shotgun_Observations: Or at least make it so the different sections of the game can be accesed through different flash games. Like, leaving a link to the next part of the flash game. It doesn't fix the saving problem, but it would be a temporary fix.
Shotgun_Observations: Now, I know you might not like this solution, but I'm not really a tech wizard. I simply use logic. How about you cut it into smaller pieces?
Shotgun_Observations: It's the grass. It makes it seem a little... I don't know... Maybe try different variations of grass? Maybe some mud here and there, or possibly add some things to the empty grassy areas so it looks neat.
Shotgun_Observations: Are you going to put random events that may or may not cripple your chances at survival? (Whether that be physically pr financially)
Shotgun_Observations: After reading about how poisonous pineapples are, Katia thought of a quick plan.
She deceives Sigrid by accepting a deal. When they are alone in the ingredient room upstairs, (which is where Sigrid mixes her potions) Katia makes her move and STRIKES!
But of course, it's just a pineapple. And I don't think that pineapples are venomous.
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PUH!
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When you get to a certain level, you "upgrade"
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I can tell a lot of effort has been put into this.
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She deceives Sigrid by accepting a deal. When they are alone in the ingredient room upstairs, (which is where Sigrid mixes her potions) Katia makes her move and STRIKES!
But of course, it's just a pineapple. And I don't think that pineapples are venomous.
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Anyway, someone should add a paper on her other hand. For evidence.
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