SixBelow: @POMA: Yeah, it's pretty demoralizing when you look at your art and see only mistakes. And odds are, early on, it's filled with mistakes. But keep in mind your skill level and use that as a sort of benchmark. Ask yourself, "Did I do well for me?", and build on it. "[One day, you'll awake] with a new sense of purpose. You're no longer afraid of failure. Failure is just an opportunity to learn something new."
SixBelow: I agree with Geravind on what should be worked on in your drawing. Her right arm seems to have good form, but it looks a little short. Her left also suffers from looking truncated and a lack of muscle/tissue definition in the forearm. Extending the upper arms a little should help with the length issue.
Here is a good resource that might help: http://snigom.deviantart.com/art/Arms-and-Hands-Tutorial-44397669
As for the mouth, head, and ears, I find those to be drawn pretty well. I think they show a good understanding of facial structure, especially at that angle (something I struggle at myself).
SixBelow: I'm still in the early stages of developing my style and skills, fluctuations in such are bound to occur. If anybody has any constructive criticism to provide that would be greatly appreciated. Rip it to shreds!
SixBelow: I tried to make it look like she has her head angled down a little bit, so I left her mouth out on purpose to try to help achieve that effect. With the way I was envisioning it, the mouth would be somewhat hidden and I felt having it in would have cluttered the drawing too much.
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Here is a good resource that might help: http://snigom.deviantart.com/art/Arms-and-Hands-Tutorial-44397669
As for the mouth, head, and ears, I find those to be drawn pretty well. I think they show a good understanding of facial structure, especially at that angle (something I struggle at myself).
Hope this was helpful!
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