Geravind: Still many typos.
This one is totally confused among the conflict's sides, names and places. Khajiit understood: it turned out somehow, that part of the rebels was working undercover and freed Katia and Sera.
How Katia earned the confidence to command some soldiers in combat?
The plot was pretty expected, but it's not very naive with details, fortunately.
Your style is getting better.
D_C_N: This will have been the last... idk, chapter I guess, of this particular story.
I'll probably post some unrelated one off kinda things, maybe. This story has just gotten too...complicated. not just the plot (mostly the plot) but also the fact that it takes place in a part of my world that I have not fully developed makes moving forwards... difficult.
Thanks for reading it and, sorry for leaving unfinished but I just don't really know where to go.
And lets be fair, my first story was prolly the best one, so I'm going to just try to do more like that.
D_C_N: I noticed that the veiwer count drop off from this chapter and its predecessor was pretty huge, so I have to ask. Is there any interest in more stories?
Because if there is not, that's completely fine, and I'll focus my time on non-katia centered stories, and not bother anyone here anymore, I'd just kinda like to know either way.
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Or not, either way, as usual please let me know what you think, and thanks again for reading my stories :)
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This one is totally confused among the conflict's sides, names and places. Khajiit understood: it turned out somehow, that part of the rebels was working undercover and freed Katia and Sera.
How Katia earned the confidence to command some soldiers in combat?
The plot was pretty expected, but it's not very naive with details, fortunately.
Your style is getting better.
And thanks for the feedback as always.
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I'll probably post some unrelated one off kinda things, maybe. This story has just gotten too...complicated. not just the plot (mostly the plot) but also the fact that it takes place in a part of my world that I have not fully developed makes moving forwards... difficult.
Thanks for reading it and, sorry for leaving unfinished but I just don't really know where to go.
And lets be fair, my first story was prolly the best one, so I'm going to just try to do more like that.
Because if there is not, that's completely fine, and I'll focus my time on non-katia centered stories, and not bother anyone here anymore, I'd just kinda like to know either way.
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