Raydio: I have never made a comic strip before. But man, was this fun. I hope to make more of these.

Raydio: Okay since no one has commented yet, I don't know if it's obvious or not, but, this is (would be) a random scene in the modern prequel Alternate Universe I've set up, called 'Chironia'. It's almost purely exposition since there is no context.

I'm hoping to turn this into a series of random one off scenes instead of a super long and time consuming storyline (I have 5 ap courses to deal with :'^). They will either be short and to the point, or long and drawn out comics, like this one.

Anyways, thanks for your time. Any feedback will be necessary for me to make this thing worthwhile, since I'm still learning as an artist -I've only been doing this for 2 months!

Rick2tails: this shows promise. its still a bit rough but it is a comic and looks like it could be part of an interesting story.good effort in this

Raydio: @Rick2tails: Youre absolutely right. I was rushing badly since I was super giddy at the time (I was having a lot of fun).
I’m going to really try and nail the expressions, anatomy, and style in the next page

Toryu-Mau: ... The downfall of booze powered revelations is that you are 100% positive about the brilliant deduction, until you blackout right before telling someone and wake up without any memory of it. >)X^D
Great going, Kalem.