KuroNeko: I feel like the dialogue is a bit awkward on this page, tell me what you think.

damrok4321: I think The only part which is odd is when she's saying that she goes actually to Akavir, and they both seem to take it so lightly like it's not a big deal. While akavir is a very dangerous place full of beasts and vampiric serpent folk.

Dominik: Naah, it's fine

damrok4321: or yeah, maybe you just wanted to make it cheerful. If so, I can't really stick to anything. It's awesome anyway

lapma: @damrok4321: Cyrodiil is under daedric invasion at the time of this picture, so ajavir does not sound so bad

KuroNeko: @damrok4321: Yeah I see what you mean, in the Nerevarine's case, being cheerful and not making a big deal of important things is how I imagine her but for Katia you're right, I should've made her react to the mention of Akavir.

@lapma: That's a good point.

MinnoSimmins: I know this is like your umpteenth post with text, but I must say I really like your handwriting.