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Zerorganic: i like it a lot! Also i realy like the layout. But i have the feeling that there is a panel missing. Between the first and second one. Wish there was kind of a reaction shot before she is being dragged down into the water. Yes you could say the second panel is what i want. But i dunno. It feels too quick somehow. Like something is missing
Zargothrax: There is something worse than slaughterfish after all. Poor cat, she always ends up in bad situations.
I really like the angles on the characters, makes the scene more dynamic.
Also that has to be a hell of a hand-to-hand enchantment there.
KuroNeko: @Rick2tails: @Zargothrax: That's probably a ring of the horny fist :p https://elderscrolls.fandom.com/wiki/Right_Gauntlet_of_the_Horny_Fist_(Chitin)
@Zerorganic: Actually you're right and I considered adding a second panel showing her being pulled back, but it would have made thing too cramped so I dropped the idea.
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I really like the angles on the characters, makes the scene more dynamic.
Also that has to be a hell of a hand-to-hand enchantment there.
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@Zerorganic: Actually you're right and I considered adding a second panel showing her being pulled back, but it would have made thing too cramped so I dropped the idea.
@lapma: Thanks :)
@ADudeCalledLeo: That's it's canon name now! XD
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Colored at long last.
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It's amazing how color add so much life into it.
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