Brevity is the soul of wit. In essence, make anything the comes from your whelpling fingers be succinct, and that you don't overstay your welcome. Writing for too long can...
Armored-Struggle-Wagon: @POMA: @confettibin: Yep, that's most certainly Kaz's style, the inconsistent line thickness gives it away, that and the color choice.
I hope you're right, Enheldor, you take the crossbow, it's a little heavier than the other one, you fiddle around with it, there's a little lever, it's on the 'OA' option, whatever that means.
you follow Quill to the bridge, she shoots the overhead light, and it goes dark,
"What did you do that for? now you can't see where we're going!" You whisper to her,
"That's where these come in." She says, and puts on some green-glow goggles.
"I don't see how those are supposed to work in the dark.." you reply,
"Just, follow me." she says,
you follow her behind some crates in the darkness, you hear some more conversing.
just as you stop to listen, the earsplitting noise comes back, and the same voice says:
"Good job, you've reached the freighter unseen, now, eliminate the Captain, and the Iron Leader."
Iron Leader? You hope she doesn't mean somebody dressed in super-fancy-armor-that-you-can't-even-dent. As you rub your ear, you see a man dressed in a yellow poncho, and a fancy cap, he walks right past you, thankfully.
Armored-Struggle-Wagon: The face she's making, looks like she doesn't understand that she can't have the hypothetical (excellent/fantastic) piece of cake she wants.
Armored-Struggle-Wagon: @Armored-Struggle-Wagon: You silently maneuver on top of a box, hidden in the darkness, you glance inside the box to find some alcohol..? you shake the thought of opening it and drinking one, you have better priorities right now. as you crawl to get a better view at the larger vessel, you hear an ear-shattering scratching noise, and hear a voice, it says "Primary objective complete, now, identify the patrols for more ease getting on to the boat."
You have no idea what that is supposed to mean, so you rub your possibly deafened ear. You hear some silent smacking noises, and see the two guards fall dead, he drops a (slightly) larger, more dangerous looking crossbow, it seems like an improvement over your current one, although it doesn't have the weird cylinder on the whatever-it's-called. Your curiosity is getting the better of you, to take it, or not...
Armored-Struggle-Wagon: @Tahrey: It is clearly a high-powered, sun-spawning ashtray solar base! and she's just wearing (similar to her fur color) underwear on the outside, can't you tell by the red elastic? ;p
Armored-Struggle-Wagon: It's okay, Katia, Toriel will forgive you after you [strike]murder everyone in the undergound[/strike] proceed to give everyone a good impression of you!
Armored-Struggle-Wagon: @POMA: Welp, Katia is gonna be more than a little sickly if she eats the wrong person, unless Khajiit are okay with eating humans/elves/argonians, although she might be judged for her actions if it's witnessed.
Armored-Struggle-Wagon: Fun Fact: Unlike drawing hands, sculpting hands is actually really, really fun! why? Because it's a lot easier, and you can do all sorts of things with them!
PS: I think you guys will really, really like the new finalboss I'm planning! (Now reworked!!!)
Armored-Struggle-Wagon: @Timothamine: I disagree, the arms are perfectly positioned! I very much like this work, Great job! and I hope to see more of your art here!
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I hope you're right, Enheldor, you take the crossbow, it's a little heavier than the other one, you fiddle around with it, there's a little lever, it's on the 'OA' option, whatever that means.
you follow Quill to the bridge, she shoots the overhead light, and it goes dark,
"What did you do that for? now you can't see where we're going!" You whisper to her,
"That's where these come in." She says, and puts on some green-glow goggles.
"I don't see how those are supposed to work in the dark.." you reply,
"Just, follow me." she says,
you follow her behind some crates in the darkness, you hear some more conversing.
just as you stop to listen, the earsplitting noise comes back, and the same voice says:
"Good job, you've reached the freighter unseen, now, eliminate the Captain, and the Iron Leader."
Iron Leader? You hope she doesn't mean somebody dressed in super-fancy-armor-that-you-can't-even-dent. As you rub your ear, you see a man dressed in a yellow poncho, and a fancy cap, he walks right past you, thankfully.
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"What do you mean I can't have it?"
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You have no idea what that is supposed to mean, so you rub your possibly deafened ear. You hear some silent smacking noises, and see the two guards fall dead, he drops a (slightly) larger, more dangerous looking crossbow, it seems like an improvement over your current one, although it doesn't have the weird cylinder on the whatever-it's-called. Your curiosity is getting the better of you, to take it, or not...
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ashtraysolar base! and she's just wearing (similar to her fur color) underwear on the outside, can't you tell by the red elastic? ;p- Reply
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PS: I think you guys will really, really like the new final boss I'm planning! (Now reworked!!!)
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Inspiration: This Music.
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