Geravind: Блики местами слишком глянцевые.
С пропорциями я бы поспорил, а именно: длина торса, местоположение плеч, длина правой руки.
А вообще... с возвращением, Радик!
Geravind: @Makkon: This One is eager for feedback! ...yet has to finish the damn picture first. @damrok4321: Best way to recheck wether a pose is okay — just take it yourself IRL ...in a minute or two you'll know it's okayness.
Geravind: @Sashimi: The facial surface looks stretched off the head because of the muzzle point. The eyes expose it mostly. Therefore her forehead looks too flattened.
...nonetheless, it really makes her look more elegant here.
Geravind: Wrong shadowing on her collar, right eye and forehead.
A bit wrong the collar-shoulders-neck positioning.
...yet pretty good — almost Makkon's style.
Geravind: Ah... you messed up with the right foot ...mostly by pink spots and shadowing. The ankle and the heel are a bit off (Khajiit had hard times figuring it out during own drawing attempts).
Guys, shadowing is fucking simle to comprehend (if you CAN into stereometry), yet not so simple to picture sometimes. Just check out, how it works IRL.
Geravind: Yay, edgy Makkon's style! :3
The torso looks tiny in comparison to the mighty legs.
The third one looks de-tailed (yes, yes, it's simply behind her).
...pss, vibrissae grow off their muzzle, not off their cheeks.
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С пропорциями я бы поспорил, а именно: длина торса, местоположение плеч, длина правой руки.
А вообще... с возвращением, Радик!
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I see, what you did there.
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Try to pinpoint tail to coccyx next time, not to middle of her back.
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"balls and tubes"
Heh, "sticks and stones..." (c) JC Denton
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- head/neck/shoulders positioning (she doesn't look just cringed, she looks weird):
- eyes positioning inside the skull (you mischecked nose-occiput axis, and yes ...side view of an eye);
- tail length (straight khajiit tail reaches ground level).
Always use skeleton layer: crude lines of spine, shoulders, pelvis, arms, legs, tail. — It takes a damn minute ...yet helps a lot.
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@damrok4321: Best way to recheck wether a pose is okay — just take it yourself IRL ...in a minute or two you'll know it's okayness.
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...wait, is it a drawing, not a figurine on photo?!
Master of illusions confirmed!
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...nonetheless, it really makes her look more elegant here.
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You evem managed to picture her tiny cheeks, yay!
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A bit wrong the collar-shoulders-neck positioning.
...yet pretty good — almost Makkon's style.
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Guys, shadowing is fucking simle to comprehend (if you CAN into stereometry), yet not so simple to picture sometimes. Just check out, how it works IRL.
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The torso looks tiny in comparison to the mighty legs.
The third one looks de-tailed (yes, yes, it's simply behind her).
...pss, vibrissae grow off their muzzle, not off their cheeks.
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