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6171: adorable animation artist:KuroNeko character:Quill-Weave
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KuroNeko: This is not very good but I'm still happy with how it turned out, this is the first time I try animating something.
Zargothrax: It's not everyday that we see a hand-drawn animation here, well done!
AMKitsune: @KuroNeko: I'm also looking forward to seeing what else you may animate in the future.
If I may offer a little input however, while the individual frames are very well drawn, the timing feels a little off. I'm not sure if your going for more of a 'slow rise from the water' or 'energetic eruption', but the smoothness with which she ascends doesn't math up with the relative snappiness that she comes back down with. I had a little go at tweaking the timing (and faking some intermediate frames) to see if I could get the motion looking a little smoother, although I'm not thrilled with how my attempt came out. 
The main point I tried to address with this was to have her spend a little longer at the peak of her ascension and for her eye opening to be faster. Basically, to put a little more emphasis on the keyframes of the animation. Honestly, there are people here far more qualified to talk about this kind of stuff than myself, so hopefully they'll be able to be of more help than I can. All that aside though, this is adorable as heck!
KuroNeko: @Zargothrax: @vsauce4:Thank you
@AMKitsune: Thank you very much for your Imput, criticism is always welcome, especially on things like this where I'm just starting out. Yeah I see what's the problem with the timing, I'll keep that in mind for the next ones. @Dominik: Thanks and this is certainly not the last time, I'm already working on another one. @Sashimi: Glad you like it 
Rick2tails: hey this is cute! more please!
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6156: artist:lapma character:Katia_Managan eyepatch meme painted_underwear positive_attitude smiling
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DarthVader: The art looks really good!
Rick2tails: someone is a really dirty girl! ;)
XenoYparxi: ^ that has gone multiple ways ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Miki: So say your clothes burned. But why underwear left?
And stop being so happy. You still need to pay for the training of fire magic.
AMKitsune: You know, burnt hair is actually a real nuisance. I actually burnt my beard a few weeks ago when testing some spark plugs on a lawn mower. Turned out there were more residual petrol fumes in and around the engine than I imagined and ended up taking an inadvertent fireball to the face. No serious harm came of it, but about half of my beard hairs became brittle, curled up, discoloured and absolutely stank of burned hair. I ended up shaving the whole thing off and waiting a couple of weeks for it to grow back.
Point is, it's a good thing Katia only get a comical 'covering in soot' when she catches fire, otherwise the razor incident would be more of a regular occurrence.
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Arcikeligo: Gives me SMB vibes, was that your goal? Because if so, it was met!
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5517: artist:invertigo character:Katia_Managan featured_masterpiece magic_fire robes witch-hunter_control_panel
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Rick2tails: I like the coloring and the sense of fun to this. good work!
Toryu-Mau: @DOOMGUY11: ... Aht aht, hold your horses, gotta get the fundamentals down on paper first, M8. >):^]
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Arcikeligo: Wonderfully done! It's beautiful!
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6164: artist:Serinexxa character:Katia_Managan hoodie_katia robes
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Serinexxa: I haven't done a proper Katia drawing in ages, have a random robe design I felt like doing for fun!
Zargothrax: This is really cute.
Also it's nice to see how many new artists joined the boruu lately!
Rick2tails: this is just too cute!
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Arcikeligo: Aww this is just adorable! I love the robes. Great piece!
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6161: Cloak_of_Gray_Tomorrow Katia:_Infiltrate character:Katia_Managan monochrome very_casually_underdressed
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CyVoltage: This is the first time I’ve been able to post something I’ve drawn into the Prequel Fanart page. Critique is great if you’ve got it, don’t ask me to draw porn. K, thanks, bye
KuroNeko: Nice, I really like her pose.
As for critique, I guess her left hand is a bit too small and the lines could be cleaner but that's all I can find, this is good.
Kazerad: =D oh man, you drew a scene that was only implied through sound. That is really cool.
Zargothrax: Very well drawn, welcome to the artists club!
The pose is dynamic, and the piece altogether tells a story (the infiltration), not just showing one of a character from the comic as is, which is not something anyone expects, it is a plus. I like how you applied perspective on the feet. Realistically, at this distance it shouldn't be this prominent, but in my opinion, artists may bend reality a little to make a drawing more dramatic. As for advice (take it or leave it): If you're drawing on paper, when drawing the pupils, or irises (for Katia they seem to be one and the same), always draw them as just a faint dot at first. This already shows where the character is looking, so if mistaken, can be fixed quickly, as erasing a dot is easy. Then, it is just a matter of drawing a circle around the dot, then fill. Drawing an eye, then realizing that they don't really look in the same direction is really painful to fix as an afterthought. By the way, you didn't remove the exif data from the image before uploading it! Creeps online can read personal data from this metadata from the image. Sometimes it even contains the coordinates where the picture was taken. Also, there are instances where the exif data also contains preferences about how the image should be oriented, in which case an uploaded picture can appear sideways when uploaded. https://www.verexif.com/en/
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CyVoltage: @Zargothrax: Oh damn, I see you’re one of the more helpful people alive. Thanks for the tips and especially the information on exif data, I had no idea that kind of information was available through the photo alone. Thanks for the help!
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CyVoltage: @KuroNeko: Yeah, I suck at making good lines, so I usually go for a sketchy style, although I should be trying a clean style sooner rather then later
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Arcikeligo: Not /quite/ sure what all's happening, but I love it! Keep it up!
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6170: character:your_weird_OC dreams tears
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DarthVader: She’s dead!? Hallelujah!
Dominik: @DarthVader: Actually, it's more like just one of her nightmares. Drawing her dead is too much for me
@Zargothrax: At first i wanted her neck to be less straight but i was afraid that it might look worse. Sometimes the best solution is the easiest one
animegaylover: it looks great betr ten mt drawings at school :0
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873: Solid_Snake blood character:Katia_Managan comic crossover knock_off metal_gear mudcrabs text
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Man_Of_Mer: Grrr! Crab battle!
HuffingtontheOnly: mud crabs. the worst. i run them through every time i see them.
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Petrified_Yo-yo: I dont get it-Patrick
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6154: Katia's_wizard_robe artist:KuroNeko bad_end character:Katia_Managan food monochrome sweet_roll text
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DarthVader: Just get over it, it’s just a sweet roll
PermanentFace: Is the sweetroll very large or is Katia somewhat far away?
KuroNeko: @PermanentFace: It's a bit of both I'd say. It's a Skyrim sweetroll, they are pretty big but it's true I overdid it a bit here, and I put Katia a little too far behind so it looks like she is far away.
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6173: character:Katia_Managan character:your_weird_OC hugs modern_clothing
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